Thoughts on Autumn Ondine Farlam

This entry was posted in Amethyst. Bookmark the permalink.

One Response to Thoughts on Autumn Ondine Farlam

  1. kgroarke says:

    Wow, Ondine.
    Very good indeed.

    I can see metaphors, alliteration and a strong theme of all things autumnal running through your poem.
    I can even see more advanced techniques such as caesura and enjambment being used. If you haven’t looked this up by the time we return to school next week – which I suspect you might have – I will explain them to you then.

    Well done.

Comments are closed.