What did i find

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2 Responses to What did i find

  1. dferry says:

    Well done Sinead, this story is great. I like how you have highlighted the key words in a different colour. Next time, you could end the story with a rhetorical question!

  2. paloi says:

    Well done you where successful at including the words we where supposed to.next time you could improve by adding some pictures or photos.

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