I like your rainbow writing!
Madeleine and Antony we liked your colourful title.you could use cartoon pictures to look funny.
I like the pictures of the anamils next time do not put the pictures on and off next time
WELL DONE NARELLE AND AMBER.IT realy good.The bad thing is the spelling.
I like it but you can improve panda.You need more detail in your writting and a dog and what you are writting
the picture looks fantastic and the writting is kind of illitaration.
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I like your rainbow writing!
Madeleine and Antony
we liked your colourful title.you could use cartoon pictures to look funny.
I like the pictures of the anamils next time do not put the pictures on and off next time
WELL DONE NARELLE AND AMBER.IT realy good.The bad thing is the spelling.
I like it but you can improve panda.You need more detail in your writting and a dog and what you are writting
the picture looks fantastic and the writting is kind of illitaration.