amber narelle poem

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3 Responses to amber narelle poem

  1. glada says:

    We like your panda!

  2. ostre says:

    IT WAS GOOD FOR YOU TO PUT LOTS OF SENTENCES SOO ENTHUSIASTIC!!!good for describing.

  3. flynd says:

    Hi Amber I think that your poem is really good and I like that you did it diagonally.But you could improve on your dog part beacause one of the words is spelt wrong and Ava and I can not read it! Everything else is great so excelent poem.

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