Luwam, I like the way you included some examples of personal information that you might choose not to include. You could choose another colour for the title, so that you can read it over the background.
Great job!
I like the colour of the hair! You could put your heading in a different colour instead of green.
Luwam I like your mouth you put one that’s very unusual but you could improve it by filling in the white bits on your eyes
I really like the information on what to do and what not to do, maybe you could do it on your face instead of underneath.
I like your ideas but maybe you could’ve changed the mouth. 🙂
I like your messages and your hair. Maybe next time improve your mouth.
your face is awesome luwam but next time you should ad more colour.
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Luwam, I like the way you included some examples of personal information that you might choose not to include. You could choose another colour for the title, so that you can read it over the background.
Great job!
I like the colour of the hair! You could put your heading in a different colour instead of green.
Luwam I like your mouth you put one that’s very unusual but you could improve it by filling in the white bits on your eyes
I really like the information on what to do and what not to do, maybe you could do it on your face instead of underneath.
I like your ideas but maybe you could’ve changed the mouth. 🙂
I like your messages and your hair. Maybe next time improve your mouth.
your face is awesome luwam but next time you should ad more colour.