I really like your E-Safety Self Portrait because the facts are right and I like it when you used your writing for your hair. It would be even better if you knew how to spell some of the words like screen. You spelled it like s-c-r-r-e-n. Also you could improve your work by using capital letters.
Cool! Next time please put a mouth with a message
Cool one but make Shure you correct spelling mistakes!
I really like your E-Safety Self Portrait because the facts are right and I like it when you used your writing for your hair. It would be even better if you knew how to spell some of the words like screen. You spelled it like s-c-r-r-e-n. Also you could improve your work by using capital letters.
Nice choice of colours! I think you could improve it by checking your capital letters and full stops.
I like it but put capital letters