Well done Fabian, it looks really good especially when one of your sentences are glowing and changing into different colours. What I would say that you need to improve on is to add in more facts about E-Safety facts and you should improve your work by remembering to add your spaces in your words.
Abi
well done, I love all of the e-safety facts you put but next time put some more up
scarlett
I like when you used a feature to change colour of the writing. Next time check your spaces between your words
I like the way the word change colour. Next time you could separate your words.
WELL DONE! I love it, I especially like the animation but I think there needs to be a bit more description.
well done I really like yours but make sure you space your words out
Well done Fabian, it looks really good especially when one of your sentences are glowing and changing into different colours. What I would say that you need to improve on is to add in more facts about E-Safety facts and you should improve your work by remembering to add your spaces in your words.
Abi
It was so effective